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Teen Poetry #6

My Days

Agean
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since 2002-11-29

Posts 9

0 posted 2002-12-06 02:19 PM

i start my days awaken by the light,
just to close my eyes as it turn night,
i walk the walk that sets my flight,
i did my wrongs and i've done them right,

i seen enough faces to make me pray each day,
i've been enough places to make me not stay,
i had enough relations to make me stray,
but i haven't stray enough to make me gay!

i done everything in site not once or twice,
the only thing i'm missing is my first wife,
but i think she not coming, not in this life,
unless i call forth the devil and pay his price...

HopelessRomanticGuy
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since 2001-08-17

Posts 495
LI, New York

1 posted 2002-12-06 09:39 PM

Hmm.... I don't really know what to say to this. I mean, I liked it, but I can't explain WHY, so I sound like a big dork. Oh. Wait. I AM one. LOL Great poem! Keep on writin'!

'Rich

"You can't hurt meee!! 'Cause I've got on my cheeeeese helmet!"

Jaime

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Posts 250

2 posted 2002-12-07 11:21 PM

"i did my wrongs and i've done them right"

"but i think she not coming, not in this life,
unless i call forth the devil and pay his price..."

I like these lines particularly.

Such a price.

Thanks for posting.

- Jaime

i was here

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