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Teen Poetry #6

I love Me

Jenn Cirrincione

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since 2000-07-02

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0 posted 2002-12-06 10:04 AM

All that I deserved?
All that I could handle.
Reality whips me in the face,
and I see the fact that always existed.
Never felt that I was capable,
never dreamed I was worthy.
Lived in fantasy-
dealt with the pain.
It'll be ok,
the world had whispered,
everyday I doubted more.
My heart too cold to handle love,
so I filled it with misery.
A flair for the dramatic,
they've always said-
"only happy when it rains."
Well, that's just Garbage, anyway.
And today I awake and see,
I deserve the most and more.
My heart is persuaded-
and I understand.
I really love me.

Jaime

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1 posted 2002-12-06 10:45 AM

Wow, are you writing about my life here?

Good poem. It strikes me as being very honest, which I appreciate as a reader. I like how you showed the affect of time and experience.

Jaime

i was here

[This message has been edited by Jaime (12-06-2002 10:47 AM).]

WinterWren
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since 2002-12-01

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2 posted 2002-12-06 12:59 PM

That was really dang good! I can relate to that poem well. You're a very good writer!
Laugh often, love much, live well.

WinterWren
"I want you to believe in life. Will you find out who you are too late, to change? -Dishwalla-

Jenn Cirrincione

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since 2000-07-02

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3 posted 2002-12-07 04:19 PM

Thank you both.

It means a lot to hear good feedback.

Jenn

"I keep looking, looking for something more." Sara Evans

xxxnuttyangelxxx
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since 2002-12-06

Posts 72
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4 posted 2002-12-08 10:22 PM

excellent poem. I felt as though I had written it. Thank you for the read ..keep it up

shea

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