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Teen Poetry #6

A Night Like No Other

Cathie Arnold
Junior Member

since 2002-12-03

Posts 18
SC

0 posted 2002-12-04 03:23 PM

Why doest thou cry for me little one?
I am never to far from thee.
Look o'er yonder and you will see.

For as the mystic moon hangs high
in the evening sky above the mystical sea,
there awaits only me.

Come, take my hand and hold it tight,
for as we journey deep into the starry night,
will you finally see
the true light,
the way it was meant to be.

WinterWren
Senior Member

since 2002-12-01

Posts 1044
...Coming to

1 posted 2002-12-04 07:16 PM

Wow. That was really good, you have such a way with words they just love you!
Laugh often, love much, live well.

WinterWren
"I want you to believe in life. Will you find out who you are too late, to change? -Dishwalla-

Smoothy
Member

since 2002-12-02

Posts 119
The dark side of the moon

2 posted 2002-12-04 07:57 PM

I'm not quite sure what to think of this. It made me feel like being in a dream. Good work!

HopelessRomanticGuy
Member

since 2001-08-17

Posts 495
LI, New York

3 posted 2002-12-04 09:56 PM

Wow! I love the way you mingled a wee bit of old english charm in there! This is a GREAT poem!

Rich

"You can't hurt meee!! 'Cause I've got on my cheeeeese helmet!"

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