Teen Poetry #6 |
Hollow |
idleeyes86 Member
since 2003-06-09
Posts 64Somewhere over the rainbow |
These eyes just won't sparkle they just give watery reflexions Once they were deep, dark and meaningful The tears inside them were either non-existant or flowing and emotional. Now they just sit not even on the brink of flowing, filled with enough tears to create a thin film blocking the view into my eyes. The wrinkles around my eyes aren't the wrinkles of a smile But old, tired rings from sleepless nights in the company of my ceiling Eyes that haven't been closed during the darkness yet haven't been opened in the light. Eyes that look, rather than watch see, rather than...see. This face is the face of a wanderer not an adventurer on a cirular trainline not getting off and no idea where it got on why it got on what placed it on that line. Where it just travels moves a passenger. This voice is not angry not sad, happy, frightened it's just words, it's all just words. This voice will speak it will talk at you, these ears will hear you, these eyes will see you, these hands will touch you ...but they won't listen, or look or feel you. Just acknowledge your presence connect a sound with a word, a word with a definition While these watery eyes see. This mind is not lost, its not even confused if it was lost or confused it would be able to think it could have something to think about. It's free free to move in any direction but it doesn't know it if it does it just can't decide which way to move so it just sits here not moving Nothing moves here |
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JenniX Junior Member
since 2003-06-05
Posts 29 |
I know exactly what you feel as I feel the same. I am no longer for if I were I woouold be lost forever. If you need to talk I am here for you as you would be for me. Two lost souls, gone forever. JenniX |
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idleeyes86 Member
since 2003-06-09
Posts 64Somewhere over the rainbow |
That's incredibly sweet hun, i dunno what it is at the moment, somebody told me I just need a bit of direction, something to aim for, but its so nice to know I have such kind support |
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LegalSecret69 Member
since 2003-06-04
Posts 69Virginia |
This was touching...very understandable as well. I hope things get better. Nice job -Secret |
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