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Teen Poetry #6

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rm711
Member

since 2002-11-30

Posts 131
Wiltshire, England

0 posted 2002-12-01 08:08 PM

I have returned and we all know it wasn’t intended
But to me it’s never over
The place I arrived in yesterday
I will never leave forever
Because I found my eternity of happiness
And I never want that to go away

I will jump back
And in each start of the imagination
I will fall away to the heavens
And never again will I feel suffocated by sadness
But amidst the pattern of emotional freedom

This too will be yours
The dream of your own
What or when you may
But you cannot hope
Without forgiveness
Forgive yourself and become the magic
The power that makes you belong.

Rosie Mitchell

WinterWren
Senior Member

since 2002-12-01

Posts 1044
...Coming to

1 posted 2002-12-02 12:43 PM

"But you cannot hope without forgiveness" Very good poem that there just might be my favorite line in it.

WinterWren
"I want you to believe in life. Will you find out who you are, too late to change?" -Dishwalla-

vlraynes
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-25

Posts 8229
Somewhere... out there...

2 posted 2002-12-15 04:24 AM

rm711~
Love the poem and love the positive message it conveys.
Very nice job on this.
~Vicky
"...until you have read the verse on his heart,
you have not truly met the poet.
~vlraynes

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