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Teen Poetry #6

CAMILLA'S SONG

Hallucination
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since 2001-03-18

Posts 419

0 posted 2002-11-30 01:00 AM

"CAMILLA'S SONG"
(30/11/02)
© 2002 Brian Eggertsen, All Rights Reserved

Sorry is an abused cliché,
That hurts a broken heart in many ways.
I could have been more sensitive,
I apologize for writting you this.
Know it's much to take in at once,
But I regret the thing I've done a bunch.
I know it's hard to see,
But Can You Forgive Me?...

The tears I cry is more the real,
I wish that it was a fase we could seal.
Hope to make your heart understand,
That there's more to it then that to this man.
Don't know how to express my pain,
Other then feeling worthless and ashamed.
I know it's hard to see,
But Can You Forgive Me?...

You know what I'm about to say,
But Imma say it anyways,
Can you forgive me for the pain I've caused,
Our relationship?
My love for you hasn't changed,
I still love you just the same,
Can you forgive me for the hurt I've forced,
Upon you like this?

I know it's hard to see,
But Can You Forgive Me?...

knightlyshadows
Senior Member

since 2001-04-14

Posts 791
obscured vision

1 posted 2002-11-30 07:26 AM

beautiful write Brian. Very touching and sad. I hope she knows how you feel, or that you showed her this one.

quote:
The tears I cry is more the real,
I wish that it was a fase we could seal.
Hope to make your heart understand,
That there's more to it then that to this man.

I think you meant to use 'phase' instead of 'fase,' btw. But that lil bit was my fav. you wrote this well.

keep posting.

“A single choice can build destinies, or destroy them.”

Getting away, isn't Running away.

"The hurt that you try to hide, is killing me."

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