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I love you because
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quik Member
since 2002-11-27
Posts 91Dinwiddie,Virginia |
i love you because your the right one for me i love you because your love mean so much to me i love you because your the important person in my life i love you because you said you'd be my wife i love you because i can do wonderful things just for you i love you because we have so much things in common too i love you because all of the great things we can do together i love you because i love you forever i love you because the things i do for you mean so much i love you because we will keep in touch i love you because i would never hurt you And just to make things better...I Love You! |
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Star T Member
since 2002-07-12
Posts 182Philadelphia, US |
hey quik! first off i wanto say thanx for ur comment on my poem it means a lot to me that someone is watching out for my poetry.i'll be waitching out for urs too.i loved this piece u wrote.my favorite line is "i love u because i love you forever" i think that is soo sweet. its wonderful when guys write such expressive poetry. hola back! |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
quik~ Nice expression of your love in this piece. I enjoyed reading this.  ~Vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, |
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roxywrestlegirl04 Member
since 2002-10-29
Posts 74good ole DINWIDDIE |
hey guy.....nice poem...i LVOE the line...."i love you because i love you forever" SO sweet!! nice work...keep it up! live,love,and die...but take RISKS..thatz what makes life worth the living, love worth the heartache,and death the new beginning! |
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banburycross Senior Member
since 2001-03-27
Posts 946viginia |
you have some nice sentiments in this one, thanks for the read and you live in dinwidde, just down the road Sometimes, the things that go unsaid are the only things worth hearing. |
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Stinky Twinkie Member
since 2002-11-26
Posts 204Dinwiddie |
After I saw the title I decided not to read this poem. I figured it would be good because most poems about love are deep and have an overall.....umm..."goodness" about them. I can't think straight so I'll shut up. by the way, HOLY MACKERAL! there are a lot of people from Dinwiddie on here now. Dinwiddie rules and it produces the best poets.  -Stinky Twinkie- |
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