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michaels_gurl
New Member

since 2002-11-25

Posts 6

0 posted 2002-11-25 04:08 PM

The wind blowing softly to untouched melodies
Cradling my spirit, rocking it gently
Floating high on winds
Soaring, gliding through the billowy clouds
Ascending toward the sun
Falling toward the sea and pulling up
At the last moment

My soul is a beautiful, growing garden
Flowers bloom, expanding in all their glory
Trees looking over like silent guardians
The moon looking over and smiling at all

Stars dot the endless black sky
Glittering and winking
Laughing as people look up at their beauty
Many searching for life's answers under them
Pain becomes a distant memory
Sorrow is drawn in beauty
All is still, but nothing stops moving

xShUgArHiGhx

Member Elite

since 2000-09-26

Posts 3150
tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs

1 posted 2002-11-25 11:34 PM

WELCOME TO PASSIONS!!

The imagery and the emotion in this was amazing...great job...i can tell your no amateur at this...i hope you enjoy it here

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Standing on the edge of the world
Now I don’t want you to catch me
I want you to let me
Stand up here and walk on my own

knightlyshadows
Senior Member

since 2001-04-14

Posts 791
obscured vision

2 posted 2002-11-26 06:38 AM

loved these two lines:
"Cradling my spirit, rocking it gently"
and
"Sorrow is drawn in beauty"
beautiful imagery here.
Welcome to Pip.

“A single choice can build destinies, or destroy them.”

Getting away, isn't Running away.

"The hurt that you try to hide, is killing me."

[This message has been edited by knightlyshadows (11-26-2002 06:40 AM).]

vlraynes
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-25

Posts 8229
Somewhere... out there...

3 posted 2002-11-29 04:13 PM

michaels_gurl~
What a beautiful entrance into Passions this is.
I love the whole 'feel' of this and the imagery is wonderful.
I enjoyed this very much.
Welcome to Passions! I hope to see lots more from you.
~Vicky
"...until you have read the verse on his heart,
you have not truly met the poet.
~vlraynes

Skyfire

Member Elite

since 2000-12-27

Posts 3381
Riding

4 posted 2002-11-29 04:30 PM

Welcome to Passions

I must say that I loved the imagery in this one

No, on second thought, let's not go to Camelot.
~ Arthur (Monty Python Search for the Holy Grail)
I'm Rhondiforous!

Star T
Member

since 2002-07-12

Posts 182
Philadelphia, US

5 posted 2002-11-29 08:37 PM

these lines are deep..

"sorrow is drawn in beauty,
all is still but nothing stops moving."

especially the last line.i'm really impressed at the depth of ur expressions.keep it up!

Stinky Twinkie
Member

since 2002-11-26

Posts 204
Dinwiddie

6 posted 2002-11-29 11:19 PM

Good job on this one. The "cradling.....rocking..." line was pretty good.

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