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Teen Poetry #6

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devinechild22
Senior Member

since 2002-08-28

Posts 571

0 posted 2002-11-24 01:39 PM

Sweet lovers kiss
Soft and silent like the black night
Soothing and comforting
Kind gentle touch
Tingles up and down your spine
Then SNAP life grabs you by the hair
Hanging you over your bed
Wake up
And realize
The true love you long for
Is one never to come

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yea...I guess this is ok..it is kinda bout me and how bad love treats me!!! Darn that love!Why can`t I go for the gold!!!! Not THAT way Sara!! BUT GEEZ! lol

PoeticGoddessOfDepression
Member

since 2002-07-02

Posts 439
I am everywhere

1 posted 2002-11-24 02:27 PM

lol!!!
yea Allison.. you and that T-rex.. go for the gold.. ( if you know what i mean...

)
Yea.. anyway.
I really liked this.. bitter-sweet, if you will. It reminds me of me... i have a feeling bad things might happen..
thanks to you and your stupid poem!!
j/j..

i like. i like..
take care,
Sara

"Close your eyes and begin to breathe.
Something's coming over me.
Lost to find, and a soul to keep.
Because you love me."
~finch~

devinechild22
Senior Member

since 2002-08-28

Posts 571

2 posted 2002-11-24 02:37 PM

NO sara!!! NOT

This is gold to me-

*Allison*

dinky
Member

since 2002-10-19

Posts 258

3 posted 2002-11-24 06:30 PM

hey,
this was good
we won our bball game!
but i aint gonna say much cuz i still have homework

stupid geography

but this was good
~samantha~

"sometimes i just feel like
quittin i still might
why do i put up this fight?
why do i still write?"

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