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NSnaomian
Member

since 2002-07-22

Posts 232
In my troll closet I be

0 posted 2002-11-24 10:24 AM

A new friend,
a great colorful beginning.
Some changes and fun,
Some sacrifices and pain.
Basically the story of a friend,
Basically the beginning of a future.
mine didn''''t work out that way,
mine evolved into hatred and scars.
You invaded my privacy,
You took away my personal friends,
You tore apart what I pieced together,
You thought nothing of it.
I''''ve tried to explain to you what I don''''t like,
I''''ve pictured how it could be so hard for you to understand.
You just don''''t seem to get it,
as you sit there on the couch,
in the basement of MY house,
with MY brother,
MY friends,
MY boyfriend,
everyone but ME.

Sorry just a vent...Needed that pretty bad.
Laura

"I have seen what a laugh can do. It can transform almost unbearable tears into something bearable, even hopeful."
-Bob Hope-

rimmie
Junior Member

since 2002-08-09

Posts 45
Winnipeg, Manitoba, Canada

1 posted 2002-11-24 06:14 PM

I know what you mean. I really liked this piece.

Great Job

~RuZ~

knightlyshadows
Senior Member

since 2001-04-14

Posts 791
obscured vision

2 posted 2002-11-24 07:23 PM

I liked this! oh it reminds me so much of some of my situations. blah. i hate ppl like that. indeed. you wrote this well, and hey if it bugs you that much show this person the poem. or atleast tell them. maybe they dont realize what theyre doing. don't let this get so out of control that it's eating you away. yup, i liked the vent. i just didn''''''t get the whole "''''''" thing. ^^; hehe. it was different and unique, but it made me wonder if you're " ' " key was stuck or not.

good write, keep posting.
Winnie Rocks

“A single choice can build destinies, or destroy them.”

Getting away, isn't Running away.

"The hurt that you try to hide, is killing me."

NSnaomian
Member

since 2002-07-22

Posts 232
In my troll closet I be

3 posted 2002-11-24 09:31 PM

It wasn't supposed to do the whole ''' thing, My bad.
Thanks for your replies, and I may just show her this...I'm working on it in my mind right now.
Thanks ;o)
Laura

"I have seen what a laugh can do. It can transform almost unbearable tears into something bearable, even hopeful."
-Bob Hope-

vlraynes
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-25

Posts 8229
Somewhere... out there...

4 posted 2002-11-25 01:19 AM

NSnaomian~
And a well written vent it is.
I'm glad you were able to put your feelings into verse,
and I hope things work out for you and your friend.
~Vicky
"...until you have read the verse on his heart,
you have not truly met the poet.
~vlraynes

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