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Kevin
since 1999-11-02
Posts 729Torrington, Ct, Usa 
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I am wiser than yesterday I am envious of tomorrow I am alive I am grateful |
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LCBS Senior Member
since 2001-11-29
Posts 532Connecticut |
But not nearly as grateful as I am that you are alive  Good one Kev, it was deep, made me think... -Lisa |
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Ina Senior Member
since 2000-10-09
Posts 1236Quebec, Canada |
it was short too the point and pact a nice punch. good work Kevin regina |
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quietlydying
since 2001-06-10
Posts 935the wonderful land of oz |
nicely done kevin. nicely done. need i say more? i envy you. in more ways than you think. /jen/ i'm so bitterly disappointed. betty, i think it's time you leave now. |
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devinechild22 Senior Member
since 2002-08-28
Posts 571 |
AWESOME!!! (short and to the point like this poem) *Allison* |
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CloudedDreams Member
since 2002-11-23
Posts 210My Fantasy Realm |
very, VERY good! it makes you think, it really does ^.^ Yes there will be tommorrow, but will you be there to greet it? |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Kevin~ I REALLY love this! This pretty much says it all, in just a few short lines. VERY well said. Thanks for responding to the challenge. ~Vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, |
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PrincessNets Member
since 2002-10-30
Posts 103NewYork, USA |
Nice Job! Short, sweet, and to the point! I like it! -Jeanette- |
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Riley
since 2002-07-18
Posts 1038in the pouring rain |
nice, shrt and sweet ri Morning mist clings to my face, and my soul opens up to you...... |
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quietlydying
since 2001-06-10
Posts 935the wonderful land of oz |
 it deserves it.  /jen/ i'm so bitterly disappointed. betty, i think it's time you leave now. |
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