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Pollita
Member

since 2002-07-25

Posts 220
the unknown realm of insanity

0 posted 2002-11-19 07:29 PM

There isn’t a thing I wouldn’t do,
Just for you to notice me.
Love for you,
Grows deeper everyday.
Trying to understand,
How I could feel like this.
I don’t know how,
But In love I’ll stay.
Forever my heart,
Will belong to you.
A love so deep,
Can’t just disappear instantly.
It took my almost a year,
To realize I’ll never get over you.
I know it doesn’t happen quickly,
Nor do I fall in love fast.
I know this is it because,
I’d risk my life for you.
This can’t be a dream,
My feelings more real than your existence.
When I’m with you,
Everything else disappears until you leave.
I feel like there is no one,
Who’d understand it more than me.
I really know that I got to move on,
But something keeps holding me back.
You are my strength,
Shielding me from life’s storm.
How could you tell,
That this is true love?
You really can’t,
Until you think about them most of the time.
I know I’ve wasted my chance,
To tell you how I feel.
Somehow I think it’s better this way,
Sweetie--- If you are reading this now…
I think you’d know who you are!
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HAHAHAHAHA They will never guess who this is about...and Rhonda---If your reading this, maybe you do know...But be quiet about the whole thing...
This sucks..And no one knows who it's about...
Guess all you want...you'll never find the right name!

ESP
Member Elite

since 2000-01-25

Posts 2556
Floating gently on a cloud....

1 posted 2002-11-19 07:33 PM

Well, I shan't try to guess.....!!!! This is a very sweet poem and you express the mystery that lies behind love most effectively. And no I don't hate your writing and yes I am being honest!!!!!!!!
And that is what I think!!!!!
Luv ya sweetie....keep smilin