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Deep_Inside Member
since 2002-02-14
Posts 377i can't stop hiding |
this poem's topic is something i've been struggling at for a while. It's not saying that i want to kill myself. I sit in my room waiting for a silent doom talking to myself to pass the time i happen to say one more ryme "for life i have nothing to show for this reason i must go" so i say goodbye another way so i say goodbye another day |
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Savage Quiescence Member
since 2002-07-29
Posts 326Wandering |
A strong feeling of hopelessness in a very simple poem. I like it for it's simplicity. I hope you get to feeling better, just remember that worry does no good, so try to smell the roses instead of weeping for their thorns. Take care. ~Sky "Whatever life brings, I've been through everything, but now I'm on my knees again" -Creed |
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