Missing U ( Is The Last Thing I Wanna Do )

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Teen Poetry #6

Missing U ( Is The Last Thing I Wanna Do )

Hallucination
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since 2001-03-18

Posts 419

0 posted 2002-11-12 06:47 PM

"Missing U ( Is The Last Thing I Wanna Do )
(12/11/02)
© 2002 Brian Eggertsen, All Rights Reserved

Verse 1
Promises been made and broken,
For hard times makes my heart so poor.
Don't have two cents worth of saying.
You won't find love this true or,
Someone who earns his paying.
The way that I do to please you,
But hurting you was not my plan.
Drove recklessly, ran a red light.
I'm not a prober gentleman,
Should've crossed when the time was right....

Lift
I made a mistake,
Know it's hard to take...But

Chorus
Missing u is the last thing I wanna do,
Don't leave me hanging by a threat torn in two.
Because everything that I do is for you,
Missing u is the last thing I wanna do.

Verse 2
I'll give all to get the spark back,
Between us where it's meant to be.
Rain on my parade forever.
But deep inside I still believe,
That somehow we'll stay together...

Lift
I made a mistake,
Know it's hard to take...But

Chorus
Missing u is the last thing I wanna do,
Don't leave me hanging by a threat torn in two.
Because everything that I do is for you,
Missing u is the last thing I wanna do.

Bridge
Forgive me for I have sined,
Betrayed the onewho believed in.
Me, what am I to do?
What can I do...to make it right.
But there's one thing that's true....

Chorus
Missing u is the last thing I wanna do,
Don't leave me hanging by a threat torn in two.
Because everything that I do is for you,
Missing u is the last thing I wanna do.

BrokenAngel
Member

since 2002-01-06

Posts 141
Puryear, TN, USA

1 posted 2002-11-12 06:54 PM

Very nice. Aside from some typing errors, it's a wonderful song. If you ever get a hit CD you better send me a copy!! Again, very nicely written, your emotion comes out great in this one.

~*~*~Night Angel

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