It's Cold and I Like Peanuts

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Skyfire

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since 2000-12-27

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0 posted 2002-11-12 05:49 PM

Clouded lights beckon and call
to leave the warm hole
I call my home
to wander in the midnight cold
amongst the whispers of the wind
and naked hands of winters bringing
frosted lips awaken
lifes hynotic dance of love and loss
that plays amongst the drifting snow
with glee against the biting chill
of the sleeping monster awoken
from its deep slumber
dreams of terror and fear
of what may have been
it's yesterday

*~* I co-wrote this one with Andrew (Marshalzu), and he insisted that I post it even though he did all the revising cause our styles clash way muchly *grins* Anyway, thank you muchly Andrew, for the opportunity to tap into your poetic genius

Marshalzu

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1 posted 2002-11-12 06:03 PM

It's been a pleasure to write this poem with Rhonda, our styles clashed at times and they have been blended slightly to make the poem less choppy than it was. Rhonda has this wonderful skill of being very spontaneous leaving me wondering where she was going to take the poem next. I'd like to thank her muchly for putting up with my tinkerings.

Andrew

devinechild22
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2 posted 2002-11-12 06:33 PM

This was really good you guys! Your styles blend beautifully!!! The imagery was soo wonderful! Great job!
*Allison*

Local Parasite

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since 2001-11-05

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Transylconia, Winnipeg

3 posted 2002-11-13 04:30 PM

Whose idea was the title? That's all I want to know...

Facts do not cease to exist because they are ignored.
~Aldous Huxley

Marshalzu

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4 posted 2002-11-13 04:45 PM

Mine of Course

Skyfire

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5 posted 2002-11-13 06:08 PM

Yeah, but I was the one who picked it

I am a Knight who says Ni!

roxywrestlegirl04
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good ole DINWIDDIE

6 posted 2002-11-13 09:30 PM

this was a good post.....i really like the word usage.......whatz the deal with the title......what made it come about........i absolutly LOVE it!! haha
LIZ

Skyfire

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7 posted 2002-11-13 11:46 PM

ask Andrew, he's the poetic genius

*wanders away, poking various people in the nose*

I am a Knight who says Ni!

quietlydying

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since 2001-06-10

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the wonderful land of oz

8 posted 2002-11-14 03:53 AM

it is cold and i do like peanuts.

we could be twins!!

but i'm personally opposed to collaborated poems. i don't know, i'm freakish that way. heh. don't get me started.

good write though.

/jen/

what if they gave a war, and nobody came...

vlraynes
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9 posted 2002-11-14 08:39 PM

LOL @ Jen!

Rhonda and Andrew~
I've read this several times now and of course
you both already know that I love it.
It gets more beautiful with each read though.
You two did a wonderful job on this and I'm
truly impressed with the outcome.
AND...*pats self on back*...I was able to tell
who wrote which lines! Go me!
Anyway..I'd love to see you do this again sometime.
Great team work.
Hugs,
~Vicky
"...until you have read the verse on his heart,
you have not truly met the poet.
~vlraynes

vlraynes
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Somewhere... out there...

10 posted 2002-11-14 08:43 PM

Oops! Forgot to say the title rocks! Very cool!

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