CwboyAtHeart (Challenge 2)

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Teen Poetry #6

CwboyAtHeart (Challenge 2)

CwboyAtHeart
Senior Member

since 2001-04-14

Posts 541
Selah, WA, USA

0 posted 2002-11-11 06:01 PM

Closesly looking over the possiblities
Wanting to make this life be right
Busy, but still able to find himself
Or... Maybe just thinking he's busy
Yes, finding oneself is a full-time job
Although every day is new
They always seem just the same
Hell, he thinks, that's all it is
Every day he has to spend here is hell
All the reasons for existance in this place
Really must be discussed with the Creator
Thoughts of the awaiting eternity fill his mind

      - Cody -

Note To Self:  If Pigs Can Fly, So Can I!!!

If someboy laughs at me, does that make me funny or just plain stupid?

Ina
Senior Member

since 2000-10-09

Posts 1236
Quebec, Canada

1 posted 2002-11-11 09:05 PM

first off i liked your two quotes/
i liked your poem. a full time job, eh? i liked that...well done

Mysteria

Member Laureate

since 2001-03-07

Posts 18328
British Columbia, Canada

2 posted 2002-11-12 01:09 AM

You sure met the challenge well, and I loved the message you were giving out in this poem, great job.

Let there be peace on earth,
and let it begin with me.

Skyfire

Member Elite

since 2000-12-27

Posts 3381
Riding

3 posted 2002-11-12 06:51 PM

Yeah Cody!

I am a Knight who says Ni!

Local Parasite

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since 2001-11-05

Posts 2527
Transylconia, Winnipeg

4 posted 2002-11-13 04:42 PM

Great work, Cody. You, like a few others, have taken the format and gone with it in such a way that it did not hinder your style at all. I like this very much.

Parasite

Facts do not cease to exist because they are ignored.
~Aldous Huxley

vlraynes
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-25

Posts 8229
Somewhere... out there...

5 posted 2002-11-14 04:30 PM

Cody~
Wow...you are really impressing me with your writing lately.
This is excellent, and the message is awesome.
I especially enjoyed these lines...

    "All the reasons for existance in this place
    Really must be discussed with the Creator"

Yes...so many questions.  Very powerful statement here.
Extremely well penned, Cody.
Challenge met and conquered!
~Vicky
"...until you have read the verse on his heart,
you have not truly met the poet.
~vlraynes

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