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Pollita Member
since 2002-07-25
Posts 220the unknown realm of insanity |
Angels, Protect me from harm. The night is so cold, I’m not sure I can make it on my own. With all the hurt I’m going through, I’m not surprised I’m breaking down. Let it all go, Until you don’t hurt anymore. That’s what they tell me, But I’m not so sure that I agree. Your words slowly kill my soul, And damage my future. You got a lot of nerve, To even say all those things. I was trying to help, But no you never need any help. Now that I can’t deal with this, You turn against me. Take my hopes, And what I believe. Nothing would ever hurt me as much, As what you think. If you think that much, Then think don’t speak. Because then if you speak, You might hurt someone badly. You could care less, No one should care about me. But they do, I’m not so sure why. Is it that I’m like a piece of glass, I’ll break at the slightest touch. You can’t be happy for me, You have to kill my soul. It’s fading slowly, Into darkness and into complete nothing. Vanishing, In front of my very eyes. My hopes and dreams, Are torn and now I can’t take anymore. Without my beliefs, I’m nothing except a girl. A girl who tried to help, But got shot doing so. Shot by your words, Of hate and evilness. You can take away who I was, But the one thing you learn not to take from me is who I am now. If you really cared, Would you be ‘warning’ me like you are now? No I don’t think so , Please leave me alone I don’t need you. I will get over it, You were always there. Trying to Damage my heart. Now that you succeeded , You don’t know where to go from here? How about just go, I don’t need your words to survive. All I need, Is the promise that you’ll just go away. So leave me, On the floor in pain. I’ll get up, Without your sympathy. I can live, Without you stabbing me. You were never the one I needed, Just the one who never will matter to me again. We can’t be friends anymore, And I’m sorry but that’s the way it is. So please don’t go thinking I’m fine, Because you hurt me in a way I thought never was possible. You took everything, You slashed my soul. It’s vanished, So be proud and run along without me. |
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Riley 
since 2002-07-18
Posts 1038in the pouring rain |
Hilo, I really like how you incorperated (sp) the logic with imaginary in this. It really gives you a good perspective, Thankies for the read. Riley ~*I found how to laugh, forgot how to smile, somehow your words, make it all worthwhile*~ |
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Pollita Member
since 2002-07-25
Posts 220the unknown realm of insanity |
Aww thank you Riley... But im sad to say... This poem is really how I felt... But I'm all okay now! I hope Rimmie Reads this... It's really good and she said she'd want to read the next poem...Im waiting for the next thing she submits! Hopefully it will be soon! Hope that will return one day, |
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rimmie Junior Member
since 2002-08-09
Posts 45Winnipeg, Manitoba, Canada |
Delaney this one was great!!! One of the best ones yet! Keep up the great job!!!  |
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Pollita Member
since 2002-07-25
Posts 220the unknown realm of insanity |
Aww thank you Rimma! Ya i believe that it's a good one because it's from my heart...it's how I felt...It's weird how much I write... |
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Darkness Member
since 2002-10-17
Posts 202The place just beyond my eyes, where my spirit flies. |
Yeah most definantly a great one. The fact that it came from your heart made it that more meaningful. Thats where all of mine come from and they mean a lot to me. Keep it up. Darkness |
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