Justincredible (challenge #2)

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Honey
Member

since 2001-10-09

Posts 92
Hot girl From Canada

0 posted 2002-11-07 01:25 AM

Hey everyone. I havn't written in a long time. My life got kinda down in the dumps but things picked right back up when i finally met the man of my dreams! 8 months and still going strong! Anyhoodle this is a poem about him, his name is Justin but i call him Justincredible tell me what you think

Justin is my boyfriends name.

Unity is his game.

Shelters me from the rain.

Takes away my heartache and pain.

Interlock my hands with his.

Never know how great he is.

Can't beleive I found the one.

Realizing my life has just begun.

Excited knowing were meant to be.

Delighted by the sight of me.

Inside my heart you'll always stay.

Beside you I will always lay.

Loving you is such a treat.

Everytime our eyes meet.

It Feels As If I've Always Been Someone On The Outside Looking In.

He Who Laughs Last Thinks Slowest!!

knightlyshadows
Senior Member

since 2001-04-14

Posts 791
obscured vision

1 posted 2002-11-07 05:43 PM

this was very sweet. i hope justin knows how you feel. have you shown him this?

“A single choice can build destinies, or destroy them.”

Getting away, isn't Running away.

"The hurt that you try to hide, is killing me."

NSnaomian
Member

since 2002-07-22

Posts 232
In my troll closet I be

2 posted 2002-11-07 06:56 PM

I think you should show him if you haven't! I hope things stay strong with you too, I'm sorry things weren't goin so well, but hey! You're right back up there again. WTG!
This is very sweet I agree and Challenge Met! Definitely!
WoooHOOO!

Laura

"I have seen what a laugh can do. It can transform almost unbearable tears into something bearable, even hopeful."
-Bob Hope-

Local Parasite

Member Elite

since 2001-11-05

Posts 2527
Transylconia, Winnipeg

3 posted 2002-11-08 12:52 PM

Challenge met. It was intended to be a username acrostic, using your username ("Honey"), but that's fine...

This is full of sweet thoughts... nicely done.

Parasite

Facts do not cease to exist because they are ignored.
~Aldous Huxley

vlraynes
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-25

Posts 8229
Somewhere... out there...

4 posted 2002-11-11 04:24 PM

Honey~
Well, I see that you decided to use someone
else's name instead of your own username,
but we'll forgive you this time..lol.
I'm glad you participated in the challenge
and you did a great job on this.
I hope to see lots more from you.
~Vicky
"...until you have read the verse on his heart,
you have not truly met the poet.
~vlraynes

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