Teen Poetry #6 |
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To the friends who never cared |
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Honey Member
since 2001-10-09
Posts 92Hot girl From Canada |
I was always there for you I wiped away your tears when you cried, I lifted you up When you wanted to die. I lent a sympathetic ear And listed to your words, I always thought it was funny How one of mine you never heard. I gave up my time To see you through the worst, I did it because you were my friends And I didnt want to see you hurt. I wanted to help you Because thats what friends are for, But you used me as your doormat So why should I care anymore? Why is it when I have a bad day And I need you to listen, I just need someone to talk to When the tears on my cheeks glisten. You are all just to busy To hear what I have to say, You only care about me When YOU have a bad day. It Feels As If I've Always Been Someone On The Outside Looking In. |
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Darkness Member
since 2002-10-17
Posts 202The place just beyond my eyes, where my spirit flies. |
This poem was good... no wait great!!! I absolutely loved the whole flow and rhyme scheme. I could also relate to it to. Some of my old friends did that so gave them the big FU and got new ones. Great write!! ![]() Darkness |
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NSnaomian Member
since 2002-07-22
Posts 232In my troll closet I be |
Nice job with this. Soooo true yet soooo sad. I'm truely sorry, and glad to say that I haven't come across one like that. I try my best to help out when I can and most people around me are ready to listen if I need help on something. Sooo...sorry. Great job, I loved it! Keep comin. Laura "I have seen what a laugh can do. It can transform almost unbearable tears into something bearable, even hopeful." |
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Skyfire![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-12-27
Posts 3381Riding |
*sigh* boy do I know this one. I was never really able to put it into words though. *hugs* |
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Local Parasite![]()
since 2001-11-05
Posts 2527Transylconia, Winnipeg |
Yeah, I know the feeling. It really sucks having to be the local shoulder, and I was in the same situation as well recently... sometimes it can seem like nobody cares about you, which can be tough, but maybe you just need to take some time away from them... Good luck. Parasite Facts do not cease to exist because they are ignored. |
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Sweetpoet16m4u04 Member
since 2002-11-10
Posts 153Ma, U.S.A |
Awwww this was a great write. It also is quite sad and its awful that those type of people are out there it really is. But if you ever need someone to be there for you you can count on me!!! Chris |
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