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Teen Poetry #6

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clumsy
Member

since 2002-10-10

Posts 106
canada.

0 posted 2002-11-04 05:32 PM

i
want
to
un-
dress
you
maybe
then
it
will
work
out.

StellarChica
Member

since 2002-07-06

Posts 207
floating down a river...

1 posted 2002-11-04 07:36 PM

I liked this. I really did. Short and simple and awesome.

clumsy
Member

since 2002-10-10

Posts 106
canada.

2 posted 2002-11-04 07:48 PM

thanks.

Morgana Le Fay
Junior Member

since 2002-10-25

Posts 22

3 posted 2002-11-04 08:31 PM

I really like this. Maybe I get way too symbolic/philisophical sometimes, but I saw quite a few different ways of taking this.

Wonderful.

Short but sooo rich.

by the woods, you hear it creeping, and you know, they're the blood in you

Skyfire

Member Elite

since 2000-12-27

Posts 3381
Riding

4 posted 2002-11-04 09:08 PM

Oooh, I like

Ina
Senior Member

since 2000-10-09

Posts 1236
Quebec, Canada

5 posted 2002-11-04 09:47 PM

now i feel like getting nekkid and running around the street in the snow....lol
i liked this beaucoup. wait a sec, are you saying nekkidness cures all? cuz it does!!!!!

regina

[This message has been edited by Ina (11-04-2002 09:49 PM).]

cherish
Senior Member

since 2001-03-25

Posts 1639
swimming in fairy floss...........

6 posted 2002-11-04 10:06 PM

(HAD to do it....just had to...

)

Nicely done

Are you scared? BOO! Are you now?

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