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Teen Poetry #6

A Heart Without A Home

Hallucination
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since 2001-03-18

Posts 419

0 posted 2002-11-03 10:16 PM

"A Heart Without A Home"
(04/11/02)
© 2002 Brian Eggertsen, All Rights Reserved

Verse 1
She don't like being touched / she don't like when you come too close /
Had a childhood gone rough / and in this world only she knows /
She watch days of our lives / cause she's too afraid to go out /
Whenever she wants to / she get's filled up with fear and doubt /

Chorus
A Heart Without A Home / is easily confused / from being all alone / and being so abused /
There's no comfort in sight / nobody to talk to / there's no sweet kiss goodnight / no drop of love so true / for, A Heart Without A Home /

Verse 2
He starts to go insane / from counting raindrops every night /
But his eyes spell helpless / got a map over where to hide /
He listens to oldies / the collection of heartbreakers /
But keeps his pain within / cause he's joined the heartachers /

Chorus
A Heart Without A Home / is easily confused / from being all alone / and being so abused /
There's no comfort in sight / nobody to talk to / there's no sweet kiss goodnight / no drop of love so true / for, A Heart Without A Home /

Bridge
Around every corner / sadness is lurking /
Then stripped of your honor / you are still searching /
For love / that special love.../

Chorus
A Heart Without A Home / is easily confused / from being all alone / and being so abused /
There's no comfort in sight / nobody to talk to / there's no sweet kiss goodnight / no drop of love so true / for, A Heart Without A Home /

Local Parasite

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since 2001-11-05

Posts 2527
Transylconia, Winnipeg

1 posted 2002-11-04 02:05 PM

Yo Eggman

I had trouble getting into the flow of this, probably because of the lack of my knowing the tune for it. I like some of the wordings, but "a heart without a home" is painfully tacky.

Try to spice it up a bit more.

Parasite

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