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Spine Grinder
Senior Member

since 2000-10-28

Posts 1127
Standing In Silence...

0 posted 2003-06-09 06:51 PM

Statement:

First off,
Where do you get lecturing me
Like you're my father?
Stop trying to dissect me
With all your pitiful questions.
It won’t work,
I’m to strong.
You’re so wrong,
To think you could ever beat me.
Yes, I do agree,
That sometimes I can be stubborn,
But you got to live with it.
Can’t you deal with the things
You’re about to commit?
Are you so weak
That you can’t speak
About your problems?
Well that’s too bad.
That’s so sad
To see this happened to someone
Like you.
So, what’s it gonna be?
What’cha gonna do?

Reply:

What gives you the right
To pry into my business?
What does it matter to you
If we’re not speaking?
You don’t care and
You know it’s true.
So stop bothering me
With your petty insults
And half thought-out arguments.
You don’t wanna see the result
If I get set free
From this mindless torture.
I’ll laugh when I see you stumble
Then I’ll watch as your small city
Slowly begins to crumble.
I’m tired of your deceit
It’s finally your turn
To feel the defeat.

If You Wanna See A Rainbow, You've Gotta Live Through The Rain. And If You Wanna See Through Love, You've Gotta Live Through The Pain.

snoduck
Member

since 2002-11-15

Posts 99
Selah, WA

1 posted 2003-06-09 11:45 PM

Me like... definitly a different kind of writing I haven't seen much of. But anyways you did a great job of expressing even the deepest of thoughts. I seriously know what its like to fight with my (step) dad like that all the time. Anyways great poem!

-Erica-

BrokenDreams
Member

since 2003-02-09

Posts 425
In The Clouds

2 posted 2003-06-09 11:56 PM

hey, I know what it's like to fight with someone all the time too...Me and my dad are so much alike that it causes us to fight...anyway I like the poem.
::Jen::

If you listen hard enough silence can mean more than words.

laurie
Member

since 2003-05-28

Posts 153
canada, ontario

3 posted 2003-06-10 12:15 PM

l like, spine grinder... a really unique style. anyway, l've got to see about getting a life, so bye... lol.
laurie.

SilentTears
Member

since 2003-02-15

Posts 371
Lost and Broken

4 posted 2003-06-12 03:25 PM

Wow...I think this is one of my favorites! I love the style you wrote it in! And the rhyming scheme was really cool, also. This was an awesome poem. Seriously...one of my favorites. Nice job. Love's.

As I smile at everyone else, I'm dying inside... ~Me

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