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Stand Inside Yourself
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Stand Inside Yourself |
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Darkness Member
since 2002-10-17
Posts 202The place just beyond my eyes, where my spirit flies. |
You may want to run with the cool crowd, You may want to live that sugary lie, You may choose to do what you believe against, Just to be popular. To change everything you are to be, "One of the guys." Sitting alone at night saying, "Oh god I hate myself." All your gotta do... Isn't very simple but it is worth it. What do you fear? Standing alone? Or... Feeling alone? Tangible friends cross the bloodline, All but few and far between they are, If you don't want to feel alone... Then stand alone, With your beliefs and principles, Stand with your conscience, Stand with your true emotions, But most of all... Stand inside yourself. [This message has been edited by Darkness (11-01-2002 03:11 PM).] |
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Android 17
since 2001-07-21
Posts 664Winnipeg |
Hey! I kinda liked this! Namely the lines: What do you fear? Standing alone? Or... Feeling alone? I think that those lines REALLY defined alot! Nice work! It gave real flavour to it all! Tyhla du dra piyd uv so seht! |
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LCBS Senior Member
since 2001-11-29
Posts 532Connecticut |
I really liked this, and I can relate to it, unfortunatly, too many a time I am the subject of this poem... great write, ~Lis |
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Local Parasite
since 2001-11-05
Posts 2527Transylconia, Winnipeg |
Some deep thoughts here... but you did not neglect to provide a solution, which I appreciate... Well done. Parasite Learn to place poetry before people |
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