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Teen Poetry #6

The Definition of Love

Scandalous
New Member

since 2003-04-10

Posts 9

0 posted 2003-06-09 04:13 PM

this is my first love poem.. not much of a mushy person, but check this out
With just one caress I'm set in a trance of eternal bliss
A flow of passion feeds my veins with the touch of your lips
I'm certain this is all that I need when you run your hands along my hips
And I become lost romanticizing the next move of your choice
As all memories go oblivious when I hear the sound of your voice
And the warmth of your breath on my neck confuses me
As to if I'm still living or my every sense has been set free
Because never have I been so sure of love's intention
Which is to disburden pain by way of sensual emotional expression.

BrokenDreams
Member

since 2003-02-09

Posts 425
In The Clouds

1 posted 2003-06-10 10:42 AM

This poem kicks butt! You desribed how I feel perfectly. I really don't have much of a critique for you, but I can say that I love your poem and it's going in my library.
::Jen::

If you listen hard enough silence can mean more than words.

Ratleader

Member Rara Avis

since 2003-01-23

Posts 7026
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2 posted 2003-06-10 12:19 PM

I like your off-beat approach to this -- totally backhand....a creative way to say it.

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WindSong
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since 2002-12-23

Posts 313
Long Island, New York

3 posted 2003-06-11 09:14 PM

I really liked this one. Keep up the good work. Pe@ce ~*Kirah*~

"Life is not measured by the moments we take,but by the moments that take our breaths away." -Author Unkown.

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