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Teen Poetry #6

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foreverwithyou
Member

since 2002-10-20

Posts 204
Wonderland

0 posted 2002-10-31 09:23 PM

You mean the world to me.
Our love runs oh so deep.
But hatred always gets in the way.
Behind me it likes to creep.
Then I come along.
I talk to you about it.
You sing me your sweet song.
You say you love me and I believe it.
So how can you decieve it?
I see what you do.
But in my heart I still love you.

[This message has been edited by foreverwithyou (10-31-2002 09:33 PM).]

foreverwithyou
Member

since 2002-10-20

Posts 204
Wonderland

1 posted 2002-10-31 09:34 PM

this one is ok....I guess........

devinechild22
Senior Member

since 2002-08-28

Posts 571

2 posted 2002-11-01 09:37 PM

I like it! Cath, I think u r my muse...I just got an idea 4 a poem. Now i got 2 to post! yay!!!!
*Allison*

PoeticGoddessOfDepression
Member

since 2002-07-02

Posts 439
I am everywhere

3 posted 2002-11-02 10:37 PM

ok, hi.. cathy,
Sorry it took so long to reply.. I'm trying to get to everything of yours.
I like this- I know this feeling.
I hate it, tho. lol
keep writng

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