Teen Poetry #6 |
Her (first poem in a long long long time) |
Ricky Junior Member
since 2001-02-25
Posts 28West Virginia, USA |
Every morning I wake up I look over and see her there Too bad it's only a picture But it reminds me of the times we share You live so far away from me But the distance doesn't matter I haven't felt this way in so long We have something that just can't shatter I get scared sometimes and I'm sorry You treat me so good and you say I deserve it I've just never felt quite this way before In return, I write this for you even though I'm no poet You make me smile when I am down You make the bad days turn good If there is anything you'd like me to do You just say, and do it I would You are the love of me life I know we can make this last I'm sorry for anything I've done Anything in the past I love you with all of my hurt I love you all these is to love about you I feel so special when we're together And I know you love me too. That was written about/for my girlfriend. We've been together a short while and I know this is a good thing. She means a lot to me. Also, it's been a while since I've been on here. Been very busy. |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Ricky~ Welcome back. It's good to see you again. This is a beautifully written and heartfelt piece. You've expressed your feelings for your girlfriend very well. Such a sweet and loving gift for her, and I have no doubt that she will love it. I enjoyed the read and hope to see lots more from you. ~Vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, |
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Tamma
since 2000-01-17
Posts 794In His Arms, Harpers Ferry, WV |
Ricky ~ Hey babe! It sure has been awhile since you've posted, and I've been waiting for you to post again. This was real sweet, hun. I'm sure she'll love it. You have a special way about you...It must be those eyes... 'cause you can always win over someones heart. LoL... ~ Tamma Have you ever heard that "No shirt, No shoes" rule? My question is...Why doesn't that rule include pants? |
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