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Teen Poetry #6

damaged, frail, frantic, numb, left, gone, snow, goodbye.

clumsy
Member

since 2002-10-10

Posts 106
canada.

0 posted 2002-10-30 10:26 PM

I haven’t eaten in two days
my stomach feels too
hungry, too full for her
I hate fighting, if this
is even a fight
I have being this way
I can’t stop this ache
anymore.
On my way to school
this morning I walked
by the church by my
old house. There was a
even deeper ache a
neglect.

I wish we could work it
out I wish I never
talked to her yesterday
afternoon so maybe
nothing would have
came out of my mouth
and the three weeks
would never have ended
(it’s been almost two
weeks without seeing
eachother anyways.)

I mean if I’m making
her unhappy and this
is what she wants
okay.
I don’t know what I
want, I know I want her
to feel her skin on mine,
her lips on mine.

I wonder if she cries about it
I wonder if she has to pinch
herself in the middle of
class to stop herself
from crying
I do.
and I just want to die.

I was thinking last night
if this does all go down
the drain, I really
don’t have anything left but lies
I was thinking, I’ll run
away, not from reality
but from my house. I
don’t really know where and
I don’t really care. Maybe
to the warehouse,
maybe hop a train
to another city.
and I’m serious about this
I know it’s running
away from my problems
but I don’t care.

This weekend I’ll do it
this weekend.

God, what am I thinking?

cherish
Senior Member

since 2001-03-25

Posts 1639
swimming in fairy floss...........

1 posted 2002-10-31 01:08 AM

I think jenmistress is a girl, just dont tell him that eh?

About the poem, it read like a confused mix and babble of a person who's just lost something special....this struck me cuz I SWEAR it wcould have been written by Alex. I actually had to check the sn and the writing to make sure (oh and the situation is a bit different too). All in all, I hope you come to some form of happiness...whether it be with her or without

Are you scared? BOO! Are you now?

EleanorMoonbaby
Member

since 2002-09-02

Posts 202
England, UK

2 posted 2002-10-31 02:20 PM

I loved this. It strikes me as being the rant of someone who feels that, after a break up, life is worth nothing. And, like many, I know the feeling. Well done.
Ellie

High above the mucky-muck, castle made of clouds; there sits Wonderboy, sitting oh so proudly....

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