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dinky Member
since 2002-10-19
Posts 258 |
all i can see is you my friends dont get it but i do i think about you everyday always getting in my way blocking my thoughts until my brain rots away, i will go if u dont want me, then just let me know all i ask is that tonight you hold me close and dont let me go -everythings alright |
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foreverwithyou Member
since 2002-10-20
Posts 204Wonderland |
dang that was deep I like it |
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PoeticGoddessOfDepression Member
since 2002-07-02
Posts 439I am everywhere |
awawawawawww! You and allison are writign all these cool sweet tight poemy things, and you guys make me look bad. I really really like this. I like the way you enend it too.. but i have some bad news... Your husband is dying.. but i shall leave you this memory- Love the alphabet. "All are unnecessary evils of a dying republic. We must <I>write</I> these wrongs" |
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dinky Member
since 2002-10-19
Posts 258 |
lol (the alpahabet rules!!) thanx for the replys and we arent making u look bad specailly not me but again thank u guys for the replys and one thought respect the alphabet as well |
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Local Parasite
since 2001-11-05
Posts 2527Transylconia, Winnipeg |
Interesting read... I love the ending, specifically, as well as the spoken tone of the poem. This is quite good. Parasite Learn to place poetry before people |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
I thought this was a pretty cool little love poem. Hope it works out.  This post has been brought to you by the 'Totally Awesome Society of Puerto Rican Egotistical Sexy Men'. |
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