Chocolate.. just something silly :)

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Teen Poetry #6

Chocolate.. just something silly :)

XxplanoeastcutiexX
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since 2002-10-22

Posts 1

0 posted 2002-10-22 06:36 PM

Creamy or
Hot, it makes my mouth shout
On and on
Chocolate, chocolate
Oh, yum
Luscious chocolate, I can't believe I
Ate it all. It
Tickles my throat
Each time I eat it, yummm I love chocolate.

Jester
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since 2002-08-13

Posts 41
The dark corners of your mind

1 posted 2002-10-22 07:02 PM

Hehehe very cute....Nice free verse... I like how you started the sentence on the previous line..it made me think while I read...kinda gave a peice like this a little bit of depth. hehe thanx for the read.

I am your God, will you kill me now or shall I be continually suicidal?

quietlydying

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since 2001-06-10

Posts 935
the wonderful land of oz

2 posted 2002-10-22 07:48 PM

oooh!!

i am the chocolate queen. my sister makes fun of me so much for it, but i don't care. i LOVE chocolate!!

and thus i LOVED this piece!

good write and thanks for the read.

WELCOME TO PASSIONS!!

::big cheesy grin::

/jen/

ps. check your email!!

what if they gave a war, and nobody came...

[This message has been edited by quietlydying (10-22-2002 07:51 PM).]

Local Parasite

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since 2001-11-05

Posts 2527
Transylconia, Winnipeg

3 posted 2002-10-23 10:58 AM

Sweet...

Chocolate is pretty awesome, yeah. Although I'm no chocolate queen like our /jen/ up there, I can still appreciate the content of this poem.

Well written. Welcome to Passions in Poetry. I hope you have fun reading, replying and sharing with all of us.

Parasite

Learn to place poetry before people
Before you place your poetry before the people.
~Andrey Kneller

Dopey Dope

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Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

4 posted 2002-10-23 01:10 PM

Welcome to Passions!

Lemme just say that it's all about the Snickers.

This post has been brought to you by the 'Totally Awesome Society of Puerto Rican Egotistical Sexy Men'.

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