Teen Poetry #6 |
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clumsy Member
since 2002-10-10
Posts 106canada. |
And tonight I'll stay up all night Writing poetry on my walls Carving your name on my floor With a sharp knife that I once used To cut myself open with. (One I still use) It's 11pm and one hour to tomorrow Seems to be taking forever, I don't Know how much sleep I'll get tonight- I'll lay there with my open-cut wound Waiting to be strong I want to take a walk along The deserted streets, where spinning leaves Have something in common with my Spinning head, when did this feeling of longing, Take over the one of apathy? When did my mind confuse living with Being dead? "i'm a light headed wonder." |
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StellarChica Member
since 2002-07-06
Posts 207floating down a river... |
Wow. This was good. I loved it. Awesome awesome awesome. *~erin~* |
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quietlydying
since 2001-06-10
Posts 935the wonderful land of oz |
i used to write poetry on my walls. i would be dead if i still dead it. new house, new rules. blah blah blah. this was a very good poem. and we shall unite. if this is true, i am just like you. and vice versa. good job. i'm really starting to enjoy some of your stuff. /jen/ at first i wondered why white oleander was in the six dollar bargain bin. |
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quietlydying
since 2001-06-10
Posts 935the wonderful land of oz |
oh, and check your box. /jen/ at first i wondered why white oleander was in the six dollar bargain bin. |
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clumsy Member
since 2002-10-10
Posts 106canada. |
my box, what do you mean? "i'm a light headed wonder." |
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Android 17
since 2001-07-21
Posts 664Winnipeg |
You always manage to come out with the most interesting of peices. I must admit that to you, Jessica. E muja oui, "Hyweyr". Pavune E lyh raym ouin byeh, E ryja du kad ujan so ufh... |
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Riley
since 2002-07-18
Posts 1038in the pouring rain |
Wow, this was really great, I loved it.... !!!!!! TYYL Riley ~* Love humiliates you, hatered cradles you-White Olender *~ |
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Local Parasite
since 2001-11-05
Posts 2527Transylconia, Winnipeg |
I love the description in here... could clearly picture the events you discussed, and I could feel what you were feeling... This poem had a definite impact on me. Well written, I can't wait to see more. Parasite Learn to place poetry before people |
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