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Shiny Diamonds
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Shiny Diamonds |
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Mor-Estal Landis Junior Member
since 2003-09-03
Posts 10Luca, Ventoren |
Your eyes are like jewels to my mind, No greater treasure could I ever find. A golden heart, a diamond in the rift, Your love is like a celestial gift. your soul is deep and sacred, I still can't believe an angel lik you hasn't been taken. Your skin is a canvas and your face the priceless art. I'm an incomplete puzzle, and your my missing part. The songs you sing continue to ring, Like an angel's harp as it sings. And the tears your cry are so innocent and pure, When you weep I'll be your cure. The way you move is like a dance, I'd like to kiss your soft lips, please just one chance. You're my star, my only hope in the dark, My light, my shining ray, my holy ark. Becasue in a world of fake gold I'm finding, That because of you, most of these days are shiny diamonds. |
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magic_612 Member
since 2003-07-31
Posts 190NB, Canada |
aww that was awesome! Thanks so much for sharing, I really enjoyed it. I also hope to read more of your work  |
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teenpoet Member
since 2001-10-17
Posts 280Michigan |
I told you I liked this yesterday and it still holds true. Great job. And keep writing. Let go of your concept of reality and try mine for a while...then we'll see how long you last. |
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Spine Grinder Senior Member
since 2000-10-28
Posts 1127Standing In Silence... |
Woah.....This was completely different than what I thought it would be when I first clicked on the title...This was awesome and sweet. Great write! "I'm tired of being what you want me to be."~Linkin Park |
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