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Teen Poetry #6

Here I Am

Jeremy Halstead
Senior Member

since 2000-06-01

Posts 569
Morris, Ill. U.S.A

0 posted 2003-09-11 05:46 PM

Here I Am

There she is...again.
Noscelantly, unaware...
stabbing me...again.

There she is...of course.
Engaged, expecting...
not with me...of course.

As she sits...right there...
beautifully, musically
playing my heart...from right there.

I've harbored no dillusions
of ever being free.
I know that once in awhile
she'll be this close to me.

She holds these rosey dillusions
that the wound has healed...no scar.
Here I am...again,
bleeding from afar.

Jeremy D. Halstead10~3~00

Be it in the truest form, or a desperate lack thereof, fail not to understand that the inspiration is love.

[This message has been edited by Jeremy Halstead (09-11-2003 05:48 PM).]

WinterWren
Senior Member

since 2002-12-01

Posts 1044
...Coming to

1 posted 2003-09-11 11:40 PM

I really love this poem! This might be my favorite from you. Very heartfelt, you got the emotions across well.
I especially love the last 2 stanzas, and the last 2 lines were my favorite.
Thank you for sharing, this one's going in my library.

WinterWren
Just because someone doesn't love you the way you want them to, doesn't mean they don't love you with all they have.

magic_612
Member

since 2003-07-31

Posts 190
NB, Canada

2 posted 2003-09-12 10:40 PM

very emotional, and very well written. Thanks for sharing, hope to read more of your work

Ceinwyn
Member Elite

since 2000-07-09

Posts 2175
VA

3 posted 2003-09-13 01:21 PM

don't you love me anymore *pouts* where are you,eh?? du suge...really think you should come around open or something

that's where I usually go yanno..need that support thing...

If at first you don't succeed destroy all the evidence that you tried.

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