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poetik_punk
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0 posted 2003-08-29 02:59 PM



Mars
Tonight Mars came into my view
And so did a thousand visions of you
We talked for a little while by phone
Could you tell that I feel alone

I sit here and I think about only you
And it’s hard but some how it’ll do
My eyes are filled with tears and my heart sorrow
And I can only hope I see the light tomorrow

I’ll wake up tomorrow morning
Hoping that I’ll no longer be mourning
I’ve lost you and I can no longer see
That man that I used to call me

Tonight mars came into my view
And tonight I said I missed you
And you didn’t even reply
So now I sit here and I cry

Tonight mars came into my view
And tonight I said that I loved you
You didn’t reply
And now I want to die

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1 posted 2003-08-30 02:59 AM


heh i feel the same when my adam is in oregon and i am in reno it's hard. don't give up dear ya know i love ya jimmy!
robin

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Lexy
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2 posted 2003-08-30 03:03 PM


mmmm...interesting, touching, sad. I loved this. Excellent write.
Alnilam
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3 posted 2003-09-01 08:16 PM


ouch. why another person would do that is beyond me, and yet its been happening to me for a month now. mars is beautiful, but mars with someone you love is better. and good luck in your situation

~*Alnilam*~
"The worst tragedy for a poet is to be admired through being misunderstood."

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