Teen Poetry #6 |
Upon Hollow Ears |
Obsolete Junior Member
since 2003-06-27
Posts 43 |
It's funny.. two seperate situations, mutated into the same problem You have been here for years, consistently strong Never has there been a point, where it was about you Long hours were worked, not a complaint uttered Now this plague is upon you, I can't say it enough.. I appreciate you And you.. Only for an instance, but a flash I enjoyed You buried your head, under my arms that night (I'm not sure if I'm ready yet) But like the other, I relish every second Just in case there is a time, that I can't tell you It goes unsaid.. but that is the beautiful thing As long as we know it |
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Kandi Member
since 2000-06-14
Posts 354North of Hell |
I really enjoyed this poem. I found it to be unique and creative and most importantly honest. It's important to appreciate the ones we love, whatever our relationship to them may be. Excellent write. ~Kay Just wanna be funny,looks like the joke's on me. |
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Jaime
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MemberPosts 250 |
As long as its known... ...the appreciation there, then its not a chore. Then its nothing lost. Sometimes I forget though. And I wish he'd say something... and sometimes I wish for silence. Wonderful poem. jupiter. the faeries creep into my hair at night leaving it in terrible knots |
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