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lovergirl
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since 2003-08-18
Posts 12


0 posted 2003-08-24 05:28 PM


Mom, Dad, please stop it!
Stop having those wild fits!
Please! Please! I love you so much!
Mom, Dad, what about us?
My sister and I need both of you!
Can't you see? We love you too!
You've seemed so happy for all these years!
I'm trying my hardest to hold back my tears!
I thought we were a family,
But now I face reality.


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magic_612
Member
since 2003-07-31
Posts 190
NB, Canada
1 posted 2003-08-24 08:37 PM


I really liked this one, well written and so very true. Thanks for sharing your feelings
Jeremy Halstead
Senior Member
since 2000-06-01
Posts 569
Morris, Ill. U.S.A
2 posted 2003-08-26 03:53 PM


for as short and simple as this poem is, there was a thousand words worth of emotion there...nice feel..very sad.

Jeremy

Be it in the truest form, or a desperate lack thereof, fail not to understand that the inspiration is love.

Rise of Truth
Member
since 2003-07-12
Posts 59
Beneath the Fury Sun
3 posted 2003-08-28 09:34 PM


53% chance i'd happen, you know. Well.  If you didn't already know, you're gonna learn that hearts can change and forever often means "until you leave".
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