Teen Poetry #6 |
Divorce |
lovergirl Junior Member
since 2003-08-18
Posts 12 |
Mom, Dad, please stop it! Stop having those wild fits! Please! Please! I love you so much! Mom, Dad, what about us? My sister and I need both of you! Can't you see? We love you too! You've seemed so happy for all these years! I'm trying my hardest to hold back my tears! I thought we were a family, But now I face reality. |
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magic_612 Member
since 2003-07-31
Posts 190NB, Canada |
I really liked this one, well written and so very true. Thanks for sharing your feelings |
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Jeremy Halstead Senior Member
since 2000-06-01
Posts 569Morris, Ill. U.S.A |
for as short and simple as this poem is, there was a thousand words worth of emotion there...nice feel..very sad. Jeremy Be it in the truest form, or a desperate lack thereof, fail not to understand that the inspiration is love. |
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Rise of Truth Member
since 2003-07-12
Posts 59Beneath the Fury Sun |
53% chance i'd happen, you know. Well. If you didn't already know, you're gonna learn that hearts can change and forever often means "until you leave". |
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