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a deer in lifes headlites Junior Member
since 2003-06-04
Posts 23 |
this is a new one hence the subject. I hope you enjoy it. Give me some feedback!!!! So who are we today? Are you the one who will face your fears or the one who will run away? Are you the one who will work through your problems or the one who pretends to have none? Are you the one who will look forward to tomorow or the one who looks forward to the days end? Are you the one who will love life or the one who just wants it over with? Who will the man in the mirror be today? |
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gringakiwi Member
since 2003-08-05
Posts 189 |
What a way to start the day! I am actually quite motivated to get up and dressed now! Thanks for the inspiration! |
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Snowflake From Hell Senior Member
since 2003-07-10
Posts 777My own little Icey Oblivion |
i gotta agree, its quite motivational I feel rain pouring down. I wait to rot away, |
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forever.yours New Member
since 2003-08-08
Posts 5 |
hey there i agree w/the above..very inspirational..lol im thinkin about posting it on my mirror...lol anyways, i dont kno if i can help u out w/the title cuz all the titles i come up w/suck, but maybe something like "are you the one" i dont kno, sorry i told you i suck..anyways, i liked this alot!  bye bye! |
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barbaraj Member
since 2003-01-24
Posts 139Nova Scotia, Canada |
very inspirational sorry but i can't think of a title. ~bjw~ ~To see the world in a grain of sand |
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infinite disaster Member
since 2003-06-01
Posts 69Illinois |
again steve, awesome work! much love, akie I am proof that the heart is a risky fuel to burn. |
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green_itchy_stuff Senior Member
since 2003-06-26
Posts 1929New Caney, Tx |
Nice write. Makes you wonder what the day will be like. I think I would have called it something like "Early Morning Sunshine" or "Good Morning?" or something about that describes the feeling of wonder when one wakes up in the morning or when it takes place. Again nice write. GIS a trickle of music from a well |
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peachesNcream Senior Member
since 2001-08-21
Posts 513Ocean Of Tears |
My suggestion or a title would be something like "Split Reflection". I'm not very good with titles myself but this is what I came up with. Good work! Kinda hit home for me. Thanks for the read, another one for the library! ~Jess  "At the touch of love, everything becomes a poem." -Plato |
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Marshalzu  
since 2001-02-15
Posts 2681Lurking |
Great writing, thanks for sharing this wonderful read with us Andy |
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lingering thoughts Member
since 2003-05-03
Posts 70Illinois, USA |
oooh i like this one ... since the lst reply didnt go through, i thought of a new title LOL! i think Betrayed perception or Split perception .. since its about your view and choice of how u want to be that day ... neways good write CaSSandra** |
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Deep_Inside Member
since 2002-02-14
Posts 377i can't stop hiding |
i like this piece kind of makes me what to get up and do something. as for a title maybe "Decisions" nut i usually give much thought to a title. keep writing when you live you begin to die |
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T-Bird Junior Member
since 2003-07-02
Posts 17Washington, United States |
i thought it was great!! |
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