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brezee
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0 posted 2003-08-05 05:48 AM


This is actually quite amuzing...just was havin' fun...

The Fiber Optic Lamp
By:BreAnna Rice Age:15

What pretty colors
Lie throughout the strands
Sometimes you give others
Something to misunderstand

You are unique
In your very own way
You give us a reason to speak
Either night or day

Inside you hide the light
That comes out each end
Everything seems just right
Your strands can even bend

I’m gonna get done
Cuz’ this poem is crazy
But it’s really fun
To look at you when I’m feelin’ lazy

I was bored lol



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Star T
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1 posted 2003-08-05 12:06 PM


u really were bored.its always good to write when u're bored it usually lets the boredom pass...

jaysh
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2 posted 2003-08-06 12:42 PM


yeah that is cool! lol good use of your time, I like!
Deep_Inside
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3 posted 2003-08-06 02:48 AM


i used to have one of those until i broke most of the things off, i think my mom tossed it, anyway good post keep writing

when you live you begin to die
when you die memories of you life lives in others
when memories of you begin to fade
you truly begin to die

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4 posted 2003-08-07 01:01 AM


you may have been bored, but I love this

It's hard to grow up and watch your friends remain in the same mindset that you left them in

brezee
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5 posted 2003-08-07 01:05 AM


Thanx for all ur replies lol I think it's cool to write about crazy stuff when im bored, even when im outside, like the garage and car and....well you get it lol thanx again..

~*~*brezee*~*~

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