Scars - pipTalk Forums

How to Join	Member's Area	Private Library	Search	Sanctuary		Login
Main Forums	Discussion	Tech Talk	Mature Content	Archives	A home without a wall, Our haven without ends, A circle we all call Our Family of Friends!

lil cherry
Member

since 2002-10-02

Posts 86
Ont, Can.

0 posted 2002-10-15 09:10 PM

My scars show the real me
My smile is a mask
My tears are my true emotions
I can pretend all I want
Cover it all up
But the pain stays
Waiting to show on the surface
Like all my other scars

Attila
Junior Member

since 2002-10-14

Posts 17
USA

1 posted 2002-10-15 09:32 PM

Cherry~
Here I am at another one of your posts...accidently I promise. I am truely shocked that this did not get any other replys! This reminds me so much of me it is scary, I think it is like a lot of people. Congrats!
Attila

quietlydying

Senior Member

since 2001-06-10

Posts 935
the wonderful land of oz

2 posted 2002-10-15 09:32 PM

hmmmmmm...

i'm thinking about this piece. are these real physical scars you speak of? or just emotional ones? and i'm curious as to whether or not it's fiction or non.

this topic strikes a chord with me, and i get rather curious.

[[[it's the internet and no one knows!! yay!!]]]

/jen/

at first i wondered why white oleander was in the six dollar bargain bin.

and then i read it.

lil cherry
Member

since 2002-10-02

Posts 86
Ont, Can.

3 posted 2002-10-15 09:35 PM

since i don't mind talking about myself and the bad choices i've made at all i'll answer your questions. This is fact and the scars i carry are real. I no longer do this, but the longing is still there. I have scars up and down my forearms where i burnt myself using a glass coke bottle and a candle (not very fun).
~~*lil cherry*~~

lil cherry
Member

since 2002-10-02

Posts 86
Ont, Can.

4 posted 2002-10-15 09:35 PM

since i don't mind talking about myself and the bad choices i've made at all i'll answer your questions. This is fact and the scars i carry are real. I no longer do this, but the longing is still there. I have scars up and down my forearms where i burnt myself using a glass coke bottle and a candle (not very fun).
~~*lil cherry*~~

clumsy
Member

since 2002-10-10

Posts 106
canada.

5 posted 2002-10-15 09:35 PM

this is good. related to it.

quietlydying

Senior Member

since 2001-06-10

Posts 935
the wonderful land of oz

6 posted 2002-10-15 09:35 PM

ok, attila. it didn't get any replies because it was just posted.

welcome to passions [the both of you]. and soon you'll realise that the most recently posted will be at the top, along with those with the most recent replies.

/jen/

at first i wondered why white oleander was in the six dollar bargain bin.

and then i read it.

cherish
Senior Member

since 2001-03-25

Posts 1639
swimming in fairy floss...........

7 posted 2002-10-16 01:18 AM

Interesting...and Welcome.

Are you scared? BOO! Are you now?

anonymousfemale
Member Elite

since 2000-02-02

Posts 2797
Limbo

8 posted 2002-10-16 11:43 AM

Hmmm...I could see a few people in this piece. Intriguing to say the least.

Remember to reply as well as post.

~AF~

"No hesitation, no delay
You come on just like special K
Just like I swallowed half my stash
I never ever want to crash"
Special K - Placebo

Local Parasite

Member Elite

since 2001-11-05

Posts 2527
Transylconia, Winnipeg

9 posted 2002-10-16 12:50 PM

Hm... this is quite a disturbing poem... I think it's interesting how you depicted your scars as being the only true window into your soul. Interesting.

Keep in mind that poetry that glorifies self-harm and/or suicide is unacceptable. This doesn't glorify, but mentions it... so I just felt the need to remind you.

Keep the guidelines in mind.

Hope to see more of you in here.

Parasite

Learn to place poetry before people
Before you place your poetry before the people.
~Andrey Kneller

Dopey Dope

Moderator

Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

10 posted 2002-10-16 06:30 PM

I thought you expressed the pain rather well, the emotional pain that is......

I like your poetry, quiero mas.

This post has been brought to you by the 'Totally Awesome Society of Puerto Rican Egotistical Sexy Men'.

SuperSonic
Junior Member

since 2002-10-17

Posts 16
Northern Ireland

11 posted 2002-10-17 08:57 AM

...I feel like that a lot, I rarely smile, I don't know why, that poem reminds me a lot of myself. Good work.

lil cherry
Member

since 2002-10-02

Posts 86
Ont, Can.

12 posted 2002-10-17 11:00 PM

thanks guys, it definatly wasn't meant to glorify anything. it was just a poem written by an upset recently single teenage girl. simple as that.
~~*lil cherry*~~

lil cherry
Member

since 2002-10-02

Posts 86
Ont, Can.

13 posted 2002-10-17 11:32 PM

thanks guys, it definatly was not meant to glorify anything. just a poem written by an upset recently single teenage girl. simple as that.

lil cherry
Member

since 2002-10-02

Posts 86
Ont, Can.

14 posted 2002-10-17 11:32 PM

thanks guys, it definatly was not meant to glorify anything. just a poem written by an upset recently single teenage girl. simple as that.

lil cherry
Member

since 2002-10-02

Posts 86
Ont, Can.

15 posted 2002-10-17 11:32 PM

thanks guys, it definatly was not meant to glorify anything. just a poem written by an upset recently single teenage girl. simple as that.

kissa~rachelle
Senior Member

since 2003-11-27

Posts 988
nowhere special

16 posted 2004-05-07 12:00 PM

Hey... i know what you mean by this poem... and i cut, or used to cut myself too. I have a lot of scars, that alwasy remind me of all the bad choices, and scary times in my life, and unfortunately, i am prbably not through making bad choices... i am glad that you are though. I am glad you have stopped. I am in the process right now, and it aint easy.. thats 4 sure.

I want a relationship i can finally sink my teeth into.~ Alexander Sterling

	⇧ top of page ⇧
All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format.