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Stoic New Member
since 2003-08-04
Posts 5 |
yeah this is a random poem...i don't really write poetry plz leave coments... High School Diplomacy Looking-Looking for my place in this world called highschool Poetry is my verbal facelift to these 2 faced people who claim to know me They don't know me They say oh aren't you the guy that raps Yeah that's me as a matter of fact-who are you? You want to be seen with the guy who can quote unquote kick a freestyle See i'm in denial-denying the fact that if i wasnt an mc you wouldn't even want to be seen with me Jump on the hip hop bandwagon-riding through all the random high school cliques on my dick for no apparent reason They say that's just a highschool senior who walks among us I'm lost-and fail to stand out-i can't find myself-my thoughts are in need of a compass I call people on their misfortunes-accused of having an ego? Before ego there's humbleness-and i've yet to know a personality with a one way ticket |
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Match Member
since 2002-07-01
Posts 286Canada Edmonton |
Hmmm...Not sure what to say to this but I will say this I liked the ending  Oh yeah and ofcourse WELCOME! -ash I wear my crown of thorns on my liar's chair full of broken thoughts I cannot repair [This message has been edited by Match (08-04-2003 04:02 PM).] |
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Lexy Senior Member
since 2003-01-28
Posts 1038California |
Welcome. Oh come on you don't write poetry then what is this?  You expressed yourself very well, it came through loud and clear, kinda slapped me in the face if you will. The last line made an amazing impact. Good stuff.Keep postin' ~Lex |
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