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Teen Poetry #6

My Saving Grace

Kandi
Member

since 2000-06-14

Posts 354
North of Hell

0 posted 2003-08-03 11:51 AM

Hey guys - just so you know, I did NOT write this. I'm posting it (with permission) for my friend.
He wrote this for me one night when I was really down. Everyone else was trying too hard to make me talk about it and feel better, but he just wrote this and then read it to me and it was all I needed. So this means a lot to me, and I hope you like it.

"This one goes out to the one I love..."

She sits alone on a swing in a park
No one knows what's wrong
Swaying gently in the dark
I want to know what's wrong

Her sorrows are mine
And it hurts not to know what they are
Lonely girl, if you don't want to talk - fine
But at least don't talk in my arms.

dertah
Senior Member

since 2003-06-18

Posts 584

1 posted 2003-08-03 09:05 PM

wow...i guess sometimes we arent dogs are we dont the right thing i guess.

Lexy
Senior Member

since 2003-01-28

Posts 1038
California

2 posted 2003-08-04 04:43 PM

awwwww..that is so cute.
~Lex

Match
Member

since 2002-07-01

Posts 286
Canada Edmonton

3 posted 2003-08-04 07:05 PM

So adorable!!

I wear my crown of thorns
on my liar's chair
full of broken thoughts
I cannot repair

Deep_Inside
Member

since 2002-02-14

Posts 377
i can't stop hiding

4 posted 2003-08-04 07:33 PM

i love when people do things like this. just lovely

when you live you begin to die
when you die memories of you life lives in others
when memories of you begin to fade
you truly begin to die

peachesNcream
Senior Member

since 2001-08-21

Posts 513
Ocean Of Tears

5 posted 2003-08-04 09:50 PM

Tell your friend this was very thoughtful of him, for me! LOL. This was a nice poem. These are the little pick me ups that make ya feel like everything is gonna be alright. ~Jess

"At the touch of love, everything becomes a poem." -Plato

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