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wvplayernotreally Member
since 2002-11-06
Posts 215yakima wa 
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A cloud dances in the blue sky I think of you I think of how you were just a cloud I was just the sky We looked so wonderful together But soon the wind carried you away You would tease about staying longer but you always felt the wind coming I thought you would stay I let you take over my sky myself I gave you things I never gave to anyone I look at myself now I am no longer clear and blue but since you opened that door many more clouds came dark, dangerous clouds I came to the point where I couldn't shine through they had taken over I could just stay there and take it let them leave their destruction on me let them pour out my bitter hurting tears while you, well you just floated by to bigger better skies *random, I always have a poem about this one guy, he always screws me over" " I think I got a tan from the light in which i was basking." |
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dertah Senior Member
since 2003-06-18
Posts 584 |
nice write. |
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Lexy Senior Member
since 2003-01-28
Posts 1038California |
wow, I think you did an amazing job. Great imagery. Beautiful way to descibe something so painful. ~Lex  |
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