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Evie
Junior Member

since 2003-07-20

Posts 15

0 posted 2003-07-25 02:05 PM

Embracing me,
These chains break free.
Everything snapped back into reality.
Once so insecure,
Worth was not for sure.
But one thing always remained,
My love for you never changed.
Everything I am,
Everything you see,
Merged into one,
Creation that is me.
Appearances will fade,
And people won't stay the same,
But love lasts for eternity.
No matter what they say to me,
I won't ever be hatin' me.
Cuz I am what I am.
Ain't nobody me.
Love can heal hurts and love can heal hearts.
This emptines inside of me,
This loneliness that tears at me,
This dying to break free,
In an instant is diminished,
When my love for you beginneth.

*Hey guys, thanx 4 posting your replies concerning my poetry.....I appreciate your time and opinion....sorry that am not able to reply to your own poems as often as I would like...cuz I'm only allowed 15 minutes on the comp....yep it sucks....I'll do what I can....peace out*

[This message has been edited by Evie (07-26-2003 04:32 PM).]

AlostHeart
Member

since 2003-05-01

Posts 78
Wisconsin, U.S.

1 posted 2003-07-25 02:27 PM

15minutes o man that does suck!! whats up wit the rentz there?? well neway.
good write a lil shaky but i like it...
~Tori Louise~

Be happy, and respectful, dont forget about those ones that will always love you no matter how much you screw up!

Silent Evincar
Member

since 2003-07-22

Posts 179
Here There and Places Between

2 posted 2003-07-25 03:29 PM

Yea I recall the regulations on the computer that I used to get... the memeories. Anyway this was a nice piece and it gave a strong subject to work with. Love is eternal"through thick and thin I'll stand tall." Someone said to me once through Love. It was nice but a little off key with the "ain't." Positive though.

NJS

dertah
Senior Member

since 2003-06-18

Posts 584