Teen Poetry #6 |
Not One Of My Best ( Take It As You Will ) |
BabieDoll Member
since 2003-02-13
Posts 268BFE |
Inflicted wounds Upon a fragile heart; Internal wounds That may never heal. Self denial; Wishing false things true. Social outcast, Less than average. Mediocre being, Nothing special to say the least. Pride demolished... Now a charity case.* ~I admit, it isn't that great...it's just what I had at the time... "In life you must dance like no one is watching, sing like no one is listening and love like it's never going to hurt..." |
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PoetryIsLife
since 2001-10-27
Posts 1763...in my boxers... |
Hey J.Lynn I thought the piece was great. I enjoyed reading it. I might think it'd been a bit better a wee bit longer, but, nevertheless, it seems similar to your other writings, and a good read. Looking forward to more, and hoping I'll catch you online sometime soon. ~Titus The few. The proud. The Marines. |
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Lexy Senior Member
since 2003-01-28
Posts 1038California |
no! I loved this. especially the end. This was a great piece. Isn't it funny, the poem you dislike other people will love? Keep it up! ~Lex.. |
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