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Teen Poetry #6

Lose Control

lingering thoughts
Member

since 2003-05-03

Posts 70
Illinois, USA

0 posted 2003-07-05 02:15 AM

you pinch my nerves
once again
never letting go
finding a new way
to feel about you
backing away
holding the anger in
never losing control

blood rushing
temper rising
your grip
is much too strong
i cant fight this any longer
should i leave again
walk away
or take my chance

you rant and rave
but never listen
to what i have to say
blowing things out of proportion
annoyed by every word
losing all control
i should back away
before my words explode...

CaSSandra

hey everyone post and tell me what u think ...

~*BayBee*~
Member

since 2003-04-09

Posts 65
In The Clouds...

1 posted 2003-08-04 01:17 AM

Wow, this sounds like the kind of stuff i say to my friends. Great writing,...
~*BayBee*~

dertah
Senior Member

since 2003-06-18

Posts 584

2 posted 2003-08-04 11:14 PM

sounds familiar in life...? good write.

Deep_Inside
Member

since 2002-02-14

Posts 377
i can't stop hiding

3 posted 2003-08-05 03:45 AM

a good piece had power. keep writing

when you live you begin to die
when you die memories of you life lives in others
when memories of you begin to fade
you truly begin to die

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