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IndigoEve
Member

since 2003-01-10

Posts 279
Etched in the illusion of time

0 posted 2003-06-30 10:17 PM

As long as there is morning,
I will know your love

To wake up,
And see simply, three words
Positioned hastily, yet thoughtfully
On the refrigerator's even face
It is enough

Even if you use plastic letters to spell out your love
In mismatched blues and reds
Simply
It is enough

And I know you couldn't ask for more
If only I added one word
To that declaration of emotion
Magnetic frenzy smoothed by my steady hands
Measured breaths
Precious sighs

I stand back and smile to myself,
Thinking as I read.
"I love you too."

For saints have hands that pilgrims' hands do touch,
And palm to palm is holy palmers' kiss.--"Romeo and Juliet"

[This message has been edited by IndigoEve (06-30-2003 10:19 PM).]

WinterWren
Senior Member

since 2002-12-01

Posts 1044
...Coming to

1 posted 2003-06-30 10:24 PM

Very soothing poem. Refreshing. Sweet.
I really really love this one.
Another for my library.
Thank you for sharing!

WinterWren
Just because someone doesn't love you the way you want them to, doesn't mean they don't love you with all they have.

Skyfire

Member Elite

since 2000-12-27

Posts 3381
Riding

2 posted 2003-06-30 10:45 PM

le sigh. This is beautiful, I wish I had written it. All I can do is smile

It is said the Creator has taken a handful of South Wind and given each newborn Arabian the power of flight without wings

blueyedlioness
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since 2003-04-24

Posts 289
USA

3 posted 2003-07-01 06:56 PM

Awwww... *grin*

That is TOO sweet.

-Lioness

IndigoEve
Member

since 2003-01-10

Posts 279
Etched in the illusion of time

4 posted 2003-07-02 10:16 PM

Thanks everyone! Here's a sigh of my own..*sigh* Just for not having someone to share my refrigerator poetry with.

For saints have hands that pilgrims' hands do touch,
And palm to palm is holy palmers' kiss.--"Romeo and Juliet"

SilentTears
Member

since 2003-02-15

Posts 371
Lost and Broken

5 posted 2003-07-06 01:54 PM

Hmm...I really liked this. I've never really read anything like it before. This was a very interesting style to write your poem in...and I think it fits perfectly. Very nice job! I'm definitely going to be looking for more of your poetry.

As I smile at everyone else, I'm dying inside... ~Me

Alnilam
Member

since 2003-07-04

Posts 75

6 posted 2003-07-06 02:14 PM

Unbelievably lyrical and sweet, kind of like the very topic it speaks. Awesome job, really. Thank u for the great read

~*Alnilam*~
"The worst tragedy for a poet is to be admired through being misunderstood."

Song_for_Serenity
Member

since 2003-05-28

Posts 97
USA

7 posted 2003-07-06 02:24 PM

Goodness, this is a sweet poem. It brought a smile to my face. Anyhoo, have a spiffy day!

~Angela
"Anything less than mad, passionate love is wasting your time...Life has too many mediocre things in it, love shouldn't be one of them..."

Kandi
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since 2000-06-14

Posts 354
North of Hell

8 posted 2003-07-07 02:04 AM

*toothy grin*
Sweet is definitely the right word for this one...creative idea yet it's strong point is it's simplicity and innocence. Excellenet job.
~Kay

Just wanna be funny,looks like the joke's on me.
So call me Captain Backfire.

Crystal Rohlandt
New Member

since 2003-07-07

Posts 6
Cape Town, South Africa