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mixed confusion |
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Riley 
since 2002-07-18
Posts 1038in the pouring rain 
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this was written while listenin to my music of course, sean paul-punkie ( that is the bomb song man ) ( don't ask ) crease the reality, try as hard as you may to hide inside the music that frees you as you cry the tears that you have held back since that day you have so long forgotten as is ment for the life of your bug on the twig and it's all you, a simple metaphor of sorts that a word cannot descibe, the fear that rests you is too much to contain and you weep without warning, for your life *the bloody tide comes in on the shore, time after time* |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
good title, you confused me....lol I'm not sure what you mean. I can hide in my music, as long as my door is locked...but the hiding only lasts until I turn the cd off, then reality is right where I left it  but I sure do enjoy the break  |
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xEmperorEmber Member
since 2000-03-28
Posts 136tx |
I cant get out of the music, even after i turn it off.. Its all inside, its my life, its pathetic. Every new song further cushions the blow of my reality. Distorting distorting distorting. Music is my perfect drug. Without it i know i would be dead by now. I love poetry inspired by music. And i like this piece. good write Riley. What music are you in to? |
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Riley
since 2002-07-18
Posts 1038in the pouring rain |
to answer you question: music i am into is like sean paul, good charlotte, ataris and other stuff like that. i would like to thank ya for replyin to my poem....ttyl! riley *the bloody tide comes in on the shore, time after time* |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
"sean paul, good charlotte" love em! |
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Skyfire
since 2000-12-27
Posts 3381Riding |
*sigh* I know this one too well... I keep coming back to this... It is said the Creator has taken a handful of South Wind and given each newborn Arabian the power of flight without wings |
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Wind
since 2002-10-12
Posts 2981 |
havent heard from you for a while, thought I'd drop in and say...something? well I like your music. most people don't like mine though: RHCP (red hot chili peppers) Creed, Coldplay, Aerosmith, 3 doors down.... I said I'm going to buy a gun and start a war, If you can tell me something worth fighting for -coldplay [This message has been edited by Wind (06-28-2003 10:05 PM).] |
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