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quietlydying

Senior Member

since 2001-06-10

Posts 935
the wonderful land of oz

0 posted 2002-10-13 12:30 PM

because of brian and our talk of poorly ventilated rooms.

:-_+_-:-_+_-:-_+_-:-_+_-:-_+_-:-_+_-:-_+_-:-_+_-:

A distortion
of reality
is all they ever
chalked it up
to,
while you still
rambled
something
about spaghetti
being blue.

And the kite flies

                                  rrrr
                              eeeeeeee
                          hhhhhhhhhhhh
                             gggggggg
                               i i i i i i
                                hhh
                                   i
                                    g
                                     h
                                       e
                                          r
                                             .
                                                .
                                                   .

/jen/

i just haven't been the same since that house fell on my sister.

[the closest thing i've found to heaven is sitting here talking to you.bif naked]

Skyfire

Member Elite

since 2000-12-27

Posts 3381
Riding

1 posted 2002-10-13 12:42 PM

Interesting Jen, interesting. Once again, a library piece.

Dopey Dope

Moderator

Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

2 posted 2002-10-13 01:11 AM

OH MAN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! That poem was amazing. I caught it on many different levels. But but but, I also SAW IT!!! i saw the kite fly, seriously. Very well done. I loved it. One of the best poems I've read here in a long long time. haha....truly. Amazing...

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anonymousfemale
Member Elite

since 2000-02-02

Posts 2797
Limbo

3 posted 2002-10-13 03:28 AM

I had to smile at this, Jen. You know why.

Another thought provoking piece. I really hate you sometimes.

~AF~

"It is far more difficult to murder a phantom than a reality." - Virginia Woolf

EleanorMoonbaby
Member

since 2002-09-02

Posts 202
England, UK

4 posted 2002-10-13 09:20 AM

Was the blue spaghetti thing about veins? Was it? Huh? Am I right? Am I annoying you yet?!

Seriously?
Very interesting. The kite thing makes it a very visual piece. Well done!
Ellie (from the library that looks nothing like a library!)

"Last night, I had a dream that I went to the doctors, and she gave me eight minutes to live. I'd spent thirty minutes in the [edited by moderator] waiting room"- S

[This message has been edited by quietlydying (10-20-2002 07:36 PM).]

quietlydying

Senior Member

since 2001-06-10

Posts 935
the wonderful land of oz

5 posted 2002-10-13 09:13 PM

no, the blue spaghetti had nothing to do with veins.

i was very:
            the influence
             -----------
             [this is me!!]

just like my cat likes cat nip.

so just now i realised where i got that saying from.  but please, i don't like to talk about veins.  for obvious reasons.  ask around if you need to.

/jen/

i just haven't been the same since that house fell on my sister.

[the closest thing i've found to heaven is sitting here talking to you.bif naked]

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