Two Reasons We Can't Be Together:

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Teen Poetry #6

Two Reasons We Can't Be Together:

SimpleDiscourse
Member

since 2003-04-24

Posts 79

0 posted 2003-06-24 12:39 PM

(1)
You can't let go of
anything.
So everything's
another reminder
of another girl
and another heartache.

(2)
You're just as
weak as I am.
Someone's got to be
the strong one
and there's no way
it will be me.
And it probably
won't be you.

[This message has been edited by SimpleDiscourse (06-24-2003 12:40 AM).]

Kandi
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since 2000-06-14

Posts 354
North of Hell

1 posted 2003-06-24 09:27 AM

I liked the simplicity and the honesty in this one. It's hard to fall for someone who isn't ready to be for you what you need them to be.
Good write.
~Kay

The day you were born, you were born free
That is your privilege.

blueyedlioness
Member

since 2003-04-24

Posts 289
USA

2 posted 2003-06-24 12:29 PM

*smacks forehead*

Is there a cosmic reason that everything has to remind me of things I'm trying to forget?

Know how ya feel...

Nice job.

-Lioness

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