Teen Poetry #6 |
More Than Friends? |
PeaceInEverything Junior Member
since 2002-10-06
Posts 31Ohio, United States |
Friends, but More? --------------- We are friends now, but could we be more? I don't want to ask, and risk closing friendship's door. New hope is on the horizon, while the old torments from behind. New hope is there for me, if my courage I find. Doubts born of past pain, rear up and strike my speech. Barriers erected through suffering, are hard barriers to breech. Are these thoughts of mine, shared or mine alone? One question to better life, or have a friendship blown. What would you say, if I spoke my mind? Around your words, my heart will be twined. |
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Local Parasite
since 2001-11-05
Posts 2527Transylconia, Winnipeg |
Your username reminds me of PoetryIsLife for some obvious reason. This poem is cute. I like the upbeat concepts like "friendship's door." Gave me a smile. Nice work. Parasite Learn to place poetry before people |
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EleanorMoonbaby Member
since 2002-09-02
Posts 202England, UK |
Aaaahhhhh, know the feeling. Good luck, and don't mess up your friendship like I did. Sorry, feeling a bit sentimental. Seriously? Best of luck, and great poem! Ellie *) "Last night, I had a dream that I went to the doctors, and she gave me eight minutes to live. I'd spent thirty minutes in the [edited by moderator] waiting room"- S [This message has been edited by quietlydying (10-20-2002 07:37 PM).] |
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clumsy Member
since 2002-10-10
Posts 106canada. |
hope everything works out if you do tell her! |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
I enjoyed the poem. I have been there and I presume many of us have. This is one of the common happenings that occur throughout a teenagers lifetime. It's up to the individual to find out how to deal with it. I'd like to think that the best relationships start out as friends, so good luck with this one. This post has been brought to you by the 'Totally Awesome Society of Puerto Rican Egotistical Sexy Men'. |
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