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Teen Poetry #6

Only Living

morgansmiles
Junior Member

since 2003-06-11

Posts 25
hicksville

0 posted 2003-06-15 10:23 AM

Love is living
Living is love
Who cares about the details?
The pointless cares and troubles
That people are sick of

Breathing is living
Living is breathing
Who cares about the goals of life
The intensity and hardship
That people go through

If everyone was gone tomorrow
Would it all be worth it?
The pain and courage inside their souls
That their lives never saw
Would everyone be happy?

Why do people want to care
About the things that are meant to happen?
There is nothing to be done
But forget and move on
Until the next thing happens.

Everything taken for granted
Are the only things in life
The things that people throw aside
Are worth no amount of money
Only living.

Ratleader

Member Rara Avis

since 2003-01-23

Posts 7026
Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass

1 posted 2003-06-15 10:32 AM

"The things that people throw aside
Are worth no amount of money
Only living."

So utterly true.... wish I had written this one.

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Manth88
Junior Member

since 2003-06-15

Posts 45
IL, USA

2 posted 2003-06-16 01:01 AM

Hey great poem, welcome to passions, Keep the good writing up.

!^*Manth88*^!

PrincessNets
Member

since 2002-10-30

Posts 103
NewYork, USA

3 posted 2003-06-16 09:11 PM

Morgan,
Another great poem. You have such insight. It is amazing to see in such a young person. I am pround of you my dear!! Haha... ok, enough of the sweetness. Keep writing. Love ya!
Nets

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